2015年6月英语四级作文真题及范文:手机与上学

2021-10-12 00:59:35 · 作者:编辑部  
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words.

  命题解析

  本题要求首先简要描述图画,然后评论这个孩子对上学的理解。图画显示:一个小孩问母亲:如果我的手机已经知道一切,为什么我还要上学呢?显而易见,本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学。

  国内写作考试中已经反复考察手机这一热点话题。2009年MBA写作考察“手机短信”,2010年考研英语(二)写作考察“手机入网”,2013年12月四级写作考察“手机在人们生活中越来越多的使用”,也考查了“网络对学习的影响,以及教育是否仅仅是获得信息”。2014年12月,考研英语(一)写作再次考察“手机时代的‘聚会’”。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题,诸多表达均可使用。本题尤其和13年12月四级写作考察的“网络对学习的影响”异曲同工,几乎就是原题重考。

  写作思路:

  1、本题首段应简要描述图画,指出当代有些年轻人认为手机可以取代上学。

  2、次段最好进行正反论证,说明手机虽然可以帮助获得大量信息,但无法取代教育,教育绝非仅仅是获取信息。

  3、第三段最好提出建议措施:我们应该合理使用手机,同时学校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

  新东方在线王江涛老师参考范文:

  It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

  We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks.

  In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.

  如图所示,一个小孩正在家中和他的母亲谈话。这个男孩疑惑地问:“如果我的手机已经知道一切了,我为什么还要去上学呢?”

  我们常听人说某某成功人士多半靠“自学”成才。 之所以说“多半”是因为所有的成功人士都曾接受过正规教育,有的是在教室里听老师讲课,有的是在家里由父母或亲属给上课。拿我来说,我很庆幸从大一一直到硕士研究生毕业我都在跟着老师学。一位好的老师可以教给你许多课本材料以外的东西。

  总之,在没有老师指点的情况下,通过手机自学一门学科需要严格的自律。而一位经验丰富且有才华的教师能教给你许多书本知识以外的东西。所以我想,在某种程度上,有老师教总归更好。


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