新东方2013年6月英语六级写作解析(3)

　　2013年6月大学英语六级考试已结束，新东方在线第一时间收集整理试题及参考答案，以下是新东方2013年6月英语六级写作解析(3)供考生参考。

　　3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Earth provides enough to satisfy every man’s need, but not every man’s greed”. You may cite some examples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　难度：

　　谚语本身的难度一般，但部分同学不认识greed，不就是greedy(贪婪)的名词么?四级词汇啊!

　　思路：

　　这题写成问题解决型，写人类过渡开发自然资源，破坏环境，资源危机等等，我个人认为也不偏题。当然，写成谚语题更好。

　　第一段：开篇引用+表义(我们的地球给我们人类提供了丰富的自然资源，但是因为人类的贪婪，我们的资源正慢慢枯竭等等…)+深意(我们应该节约资源，保护地球)

　　第二段：正能量(节约资源有利于子孙后代可持续发展，否则。。。还可反面论证下)+举例(用我们经常看到**现象，把例子印出来：比如过渡开采煤矿造成资源紧缺啊，过渡捕鱼，捕猎造成生态失衡啊，围湖造田啊，比如一些旅游景点过度开发，环境被破坏都可以)

　　第三段：再次强调保护自然资源重要性+我们自己具体应该怎么做

　　范文：

　　Earth, as a remark has it, provides enough to satisfy every man’s need, but not every man’s greed. In other words, natural resources of the world are abundant enough to meet the demand of human beings. Nevertheless, should people exploit natural resources of the Earth recklessly and excessively, these resources would be exhausted one day. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that we should effectively protect, rationally exploit and economize on natural resources.

　　Saving such resources as water, coal, oil and wood could ensure the sustainable development of the society and environment. Otherwise, nothing would be left for the future generation. The Amazon rainforest, which is called the lung of the Earth, is a case in point. Due to deforestation, the area of the Amazon rainforest has been dwindling year by year and many species there are endangered.

　　In short, we have only one Earth. On no account could we exploit natural resources excessively. Hence, it is imperative for us to cherish and protect the nature for the benefit of future generations and ourselves. Only in this way can we preserve a beautiful, harmonious, abundant and varied world.

长沙新东方 高杰