新东方2013年6月英语六级写作解析(2)

　　2013年6月大学英语六级考试已结束，新东方在线第一时间收集整理试题及参考答案，以下是新东方2013年6月英语六级写作解析(2)供考生参考。

　　2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Good habits result from resisting temptation”. You may cite some examples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　难度：

　　谚语本身的难度大于上一个题目，resist和temptation两个词对部分学生有一定难度，但其实都是四六级词汇啊!!有同学因为这两个词完全跑题。

　　思路：

　　第一段：开篇引用+深意(这里直接写深意就可以了：生活中充满了各种诱惑，抵御诱惑才能养成好习惯或者我们应该学会抵御诱惑)

　　第二段：正能量(抵御诱惑有助于…比如：让我们能专心致志去做更有意义的事情等…)+举例(必须要举例!题目要求了。 找个名人编个他抵御诱惑后取得成功的例子或用自己做例子都很好)

　　第三段：再次强调抵御诱惑对于培养好习惯很重要+我们自己具体应该怎么做

　　范文：

　　Good habits, so the proverb has it, result from resisting temptation. Or, to put it another way, in a dazzling world of myriad temptations，one can foster good habits only if his excessive desire is controlled and the temptation is resisted.

　　It is easy for those who fail to resist temptation to go astray or get into bad habits under the influence of evil companies. A recent survey reveals that teens smoke, take drugs, and ride with drunk drivers not because they haven't thought about the risks, but because they are tempted by their peers to try new things. By contrast, those who succeed in resisting temptation can always devote themselves to more meaningful things. Take college students for example. Only if we resist the temptation of playing computer games or other meaningless entertainments can we form such good habits as reading, keeping good hours, to name just a few.

　　In short, in fostering good habits, nothing can be more important than resisting temptation. Hence, it is essential that schools，educators and parents combine efforts to cultivate young people’s ability of telling right from wrong as well as guide them in fostering correct views on life and values. Only in this way can good habits be formed.

长沙新东方 高杰