新东方2013年6月英语六级写作解析(1)

　　2013年6月大学英语六级考试已结束，新东方在线第一时间收集整理试题及参考答案，以下是新东方2013年6月英语六级写作解析(1)供考生参考。

　　1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”. You may cite some examples to support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　难度：

　　典型的谚语警句型的文章，相比其他三篇难度低很多，谚语本身非常好理解，并且是最好用谚语警句模板套用的一篇。抽到这篇的同学赚了!

　　思路：

　　第一段：开篇引用+表义(微笑缩短了人与人的距离)+深意(生活中，我们应该微笑面对他人)

　　第二段：正能量(微笑的魔力，比如可以让我们交到更多朋友啊，微笑化解尴尬啊，对于商家来说微笑可以带来更多商机啊，随意写一两点，还可反面论证一下，不过没有了微笑， 生活就会失去温暖和色彩，等等…)+举例(必须要举例!题目要求了。随便编个某某企业微笑服务取得成功，或者你自己参加面试因为微笑所以…还记不记得我上课讲过的虚拟采访??!这个都可以用。写的挫没事，但一定要写)

　　第三段：再次强调微笑的重要性+我们自己具体应该怎么做

　　范文：

　　A smile, as the proverb has it, is the shortest distance between two people. In other words, a smile could serve as a bridge to connect two people and shorten the distance between two hearts. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that we should always be friendly and polite to other people.

　　First and foremost，a smile proves to be the most effective way to break the ice between two strangers. In addition, being warm-hearted and friendly could promote mutual understanding and friendship. Those who always wear a warm smile are sure to be more popular than those who treat others with coldness and indifference. Zhu Dan is a case in point. She is said to practice smiling in front of the mirror for hours everyday before walking up onto the stage. Finally, she becomes one of the most famous hostesses in China.

　　To conclude, nothing can be more effective than a warm smile in bringing people closer. Hence, it is advisable for people to open their mind and treat others with sincerity and warmth. Only in this way can we win more friends.

长沙新东方 高杰