2017年12月英语六级作文真题答案及解析：帮助

2017年12月英语六级作文真题答案及解析：帮助

广州新东方学校徐欢 新东方在线

　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Help others, and you will be helped when you are in need.” You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　【参考范文】

　　From ancient times, helping those at a disadvantage has always been a time-honored virtue upheld by all people in China and in the world at large. This simple yet thought-provoking saying that help others, and you will be helped when you are in need reminds us to lend a helping hand to others whenever they are in need.

　　Why does giving a helping hand to others count so much in current society? For one thing, helping others will bring us spiritual satisfaction. When we lend a helping hand to those in need, we will obtain certain spiritual delight, which can never be paralleled by any material achievement. For another, offering assistance to others will win you generous help from others when you are in a desperate situation. To drive my point home, I would like to give an example of my classmate who is always ready to help others address various problems about school assignments and everyday life. Unfortunately, his father was diagnosed with a severe disease last year and the medical treatment almost exhausted all their savings. After being told such bad news, almost all class members, generously and voluntarily, donated money to him and offered as much help as we could.

　　In light of what has been argued so far, it is obvious that helping others is a traditional Chinese virtue which we should carry forward through practical actions. As a result, as college students--the backbone of our society--we are supposed to be a vanguard, striving to create a social climate in which everyone helps and supports each other.

　　【解析】

　　本次六级作文属于哲理类作文，要求我们就“帮助别人，才能在遇到困难时得到别人的帮助”这一哲理展开论述。但考生一定要仔细审题， 题目要求我们要举例说明，那我们一定要列举事例进行论证。这种题型的作文我们上课练习过很多。这篇作文第一段我们可以引出帮助别人这一哲理，阐述这一哲理的意义。然后第二段说下帮助别人的两个好处，再选择其中一个论点进行正反论证或举例论证。第三段总结概括一下这一哲理的好处，然后从自身或者媒体或者政府或者学校呼吁一句即可。