2018年6月英语六级写作点评与解析

2018年6月六级写作点评与解析

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　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of building trust between businesses and consumers/teachers and students/employers and employees. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. 150-200 words

　　审题审3遍，核心词就是build trust(建立信任)，再把对象定位关系匹配一下，根据三段12句的架构原则，第一段写一下大背景与主题引入，第二段分析一下如何建立互信的重要性123，最后结尾段可以用建议或措施做结尾。回归关键词，基本还是上次的抽象主题模式。

　　Living in a highly developed society where our living standard has been dramatically enhanced and our horizons tremendously enlarged, we come to realize that mutual trust is the basis for the stable development of relations in all works of life， especially between businesses and consumers.

　　Why does building up trust become important in business? I believe the answer is very obvious and the reasons can be listed as follows. To begin with, trust is invisible control in business market. As the saying goes, “20 pages of agreement would not make a difference if the trust is not there.” Moreover, trust is the key to long-term development, which can enhance the reputation and will finally benefit the business. Finally, if there is strong trust between businesses and consumers, it can reduce risks in business circle and safeguard buyers. In this e-shopping age, only trust can establish and developing a perfect evaluation system.

　　In general, it is of great significance in boosting mutual trust. Only in this way can we finally promote bilateral relations and strengthen the business stability.