英语六级作文：电视相亲节目（高分评点）2

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　　Nowadays, the blind-date show is definitely popular. This kind of show has hooked many pretty, outstanding and(删除) young people to take part in finding his princess or her Mr.right.. What’s more, the blind-date show has been the enthusiastic topic in our free time.

　　Why is this kind of show so attractive? On one hand, young people are so busy in working that have no time to meet new friends and develop further relationships. On top of that , maybe someone is quiet strick(改为strict) with the lover ,so he or she will have more chances to meat(改为meet) different kind of people then choose the best one .On the other hand , some youth has the arm of(你是想用aim吗?) becoming a pop star to join the show instead of dating sincerely .

　　In my opinion ,the blind -date show provides a new kind of enthusiasm for audience to choose ,(改为句号)it can make our life more colorful and to some degree ,it truly gives some singles a new way to date. However, i hope that the show can be pure and innocent . Fewer lies ,more truths.

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　　同学你好，你的英语功底很好，这篇作文是高分作文!继续保持~~