英语六级作文：电视相亲节目（高分评点）3

　　作文在英语六级考试中占有非常重要的位置，但是很多考生在备考时总会发现自己写的句子不够精彩。那么在最后的备考时间里，各位考生应该多看范文，学习范文中的词汇和语句，这样能够提高复习效率，在考试中取得好成绩。

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　　Recently, blind-date show has dominated over the TV screen. Young men and women at their marriageable age swarm into various blind-date shows and try to find an ideal partner.

　　There are probably three reasons to explain this fad. In the first place, it is not uncontroversial(改为controversial，双重否定表肯定)that there are(删除) indeed plenty of unmarried adult men and women teem with this globe. To find a perfect partner, each and every one of them takes pains to seek opportunities and occasions. Blind-date show, naturally, for unmarried people, becomes a popular and practical approach to meet their counterparts. In the second place, this fresh program brings about considerable economic benefit to both TV stations and sponsors. Last but not least, TV viewers’ enthusiasm kindles the prevalence of this sort of show. It is true that blind-date show will not be a hit if TV viewers dislike it.

　　As far as I am concerned, this program provides a platform for single people to locate their destiny, for economical(economical是节约的意思，改为economic)entities concerned(删除) to earn money, for TV viewers to relax themselves. Therefore, frankly speaking, I am a protagonist of blind-date show.

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　　高分作文!思想表达清楚，没有冗余部分。而且用了一些高分词组!继续加油！