英语六级作文:电视相亲节目(高分评点)4

2013-05-16 00:00:00 · 作者:编辑部  
作文在英语六级考试中占有非常重要的位置,但是很多考生在备考时总会发现自己写的句子不够精彩。那么在最后的备考时间里,各位考生应该多看范文,学习范文中的词汇和语句,这样能够提高复习效率,在考试中取得好成绩

  作文在英语六级考试中占有非常重要的位置,但是很多考生在备考时总会发现自己写的句子不够精彩。那么在最后的备考时间里,各位考生应该多看范文,学习范文中的词汇和语句,这样能够提高复习效率,在考试中取得好成绩。

  高分作文+点评:

  高分作文:

  You can find many blind-date shows on many channels on weekend evenings these days. People not only watch such program but also discuss the beautiful girls, handsome men and the activities in the shows.

  Several reasons result in the popularity of these shows. First of all, love is no longer extremely private and people, especially young people, are not as shy as their parents when it comes to love. Many prefer showing their love in front of people, even millions of people. Secondly, nowadays working young(两个词换一下位置) people’s social network is so narrow that they have to extend their targets on these shows. Not only do they have more choices on the show, but also they advertise themselves to the audience.

  In my opinion, we can only treat such programs as mere amusement because I do not quite believe that true love can be created through such as short time. This show may be a place where people get to know each other and listen to advice from guests and hosts, but it is never where two people truly become lovers at the end of the show.

  点评:

  Excellent! 你的思路很清晰,而且表达能力非常好,高分作文!

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