新东方2008年6月四级写作点评

recreational activities

In recent years, millions of recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games have mushroomed all over china.it is commonly accepted that the recreational activities are as vital as air and water.in contrast,others maintain that these activities' harmfulness is potential.

Those whose hold the first opinion claim that recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others. some others still believe that we may fail to concentrate our duties such as studying and working if we pay time on the recreational activities ,which in turn may lead to further consequences.

In a word,taking into account of all these factors,we may reach the conclusion that recreational activities should be done within a certain limit.only in this way,can we keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.

2008年6月21日的四级考试如期而至。作为新四级写作的第五次实践，本次的作文考试带给我们的依旧是熟悉的老题型，而且是再熟悉不过的、最最古老的题型。现在我们就一起来分析一下这次新四级作文。

如前所述，本次考试，从题型上讲，是历次作文中比较简单的一种，即对于某种社会问题，出现两种对立观点，最后要阐述自己的观点。这种题型自05年6月之后，就因其自身的古老性，让位于其他的题型，而今它再次活跃于四级作文的舞台—— 1. 娱乐活动多种多样 2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性 3.作为大学生我的看法

对于此种作文，结构上还是那种既经典又保守的三段式；第一段是传统的现象描述，因为娱乐形式的多样化是一个encouraging 的趋势，所以我们可以用millions of ，have mushroomed all over china这样的表达，第一段的第二三句则是对比选择性的经典开篇方式：it is commonly accepted that the recreational activities are as vital as air and water.in contrast,others maintain that these activities' harmfulness is potential.令两边的争论初见端倪。

第二段，先阐释正面的观点。还是用固有的形式：先说纯粹的观点。Those whose hold the first opinion claim that recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends . 然后用1到2条理由去支持它because most of these activities are done with others.这其中要注意说话人所站的立场，同时更要注意理由与理由之间的逻辑关系，从而添加表示层次关系的词语。紧接着我们要大胆地推翻此前的所有的论断，用转折性的词语引出第二种人的心态，即负面的观点。这一段我们同样恪守前文的标准，即纯粹的观点，同时附以1到2条理由作为理论支持 conversely speaking,some others still believe that we may fail to concentrate our duties such as studying and working if we pay time on the recreational activities ,which in turn may lead to further consequences.

最后一段，轮到自己表态了,也是我在课上反复强调过的观点总结段。在这里，老师提醒各位考生，一，不要过于单纯，即自己内心里赞同什么就以什么强调去评判，而要选取一个自己比较容易论述的角度去写；二，不要过于直白，不要用铿锵的态度口诛笔伐，这样于人于己都无益，相反要站在中庸的立场上，客观地评价之：In a word,taking into account of all these factors,we may reach the conclusion that recreational activities should be done within a certain limit.only in this way,can we keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.

从考试内容上看，本次作文虽然没有贴近校园生活，但是整体上却没有远离“社会热点问题”这一大方向。本次作文在题型上是我们熟悉的那种古老的双刃剑

说到平时写作的锻炼，在这里，笔者将最后就这个问题谈一谈。考生也许能够看出，所有的作文考试似乎看上去都不难，但为何我们却迟迟不敢下笔呢？原因就在于我们平时的锻炼比较少。在此笔者就如何在日常英语学习中提高写作实力给广大考生五项建议：

1，英语基本功和综合能力的长期积累。

　　2，英语实用文体写作水平的提高。

　　3，各种文体的有代表性的句型结构的记忆。

　　4，各种题材内容的广泛阅读涉猎。

　　5，各种写作方法的交互使用和整合运用等。同时在考场上如果运用到其中的一些典型性句型；并且注意到每个段落都有一个明确的核心意思(即主题句)；注意到整个篇章较为有逻辑；最后就是不要在文章中犯“低级”错误，即简单的语法错误。这样的话，这篇文章的分数可以稳定在优秀等级。

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