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【真题描述】
　　

　　Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of "Creating a Green Campus". You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
　　

　　1、建设绿色校园很重要

　　
　　2、绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……

　　
　　3、为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

　　
　　【真题解析】

　　
　　今天的四级考试写作部分不出意外地考察了校园生活方面的题目。这种题目沿袭了近几年来对于此类题目的考核方式，主要针对校园环境方面的话题进行探讨。写作提纲也跟以往相似：先阐述现象，然后就此现象的产生原因或应对措施，抑或危害进行分层次分析，最后在第三段发表个人见解，一般是预测未来趋势或者进行呼吁。只要对于四级作文稍作准备的同学，在见到本次考题的时候都不会感到束手无策。
　　

　　继2009年Free Admission to Museums，本次题目再次结合校园生活引发思考，这个题目既考查了学生对平时生活其中的校园环境的思考，也需要同学们对校园精神环境方面的深入思索（“绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境”）。这样一个话题不仅是学生们聚焦的中心，也值得引起校方和整个教育体制的一个思考。
　　

　　一般而言，四级写作的结构是三段式，就本文而言，建议三段可以完全按照提纲进行：即第一段：绿色校园这个话题值得引起重视；第二段：绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境，还应该和人文精神以及文明建设联系在一起；第三段：为了建设绿色校园，学校、政府和社会各界应该采取哪些措施。
　　

　　同学们在考场中构思作文的时候，不仅应该从提纲入手，还应该想一想老师上课时讲过哪些亮点句式是可以在本篇文章当中用上的，比如说超豪华强调句式：It is +被强调部分+逗号+it has been said+逗号+that+原句剩余成分。再比如说大家最熟悉的部分倒装句：Only in this way, can we……抑或经典被动语态，都是同学们应该在考场上能够想起来的可以和本篇文章相结合起来的句型。同时，同学们应该考虑到用词的替换，在本篇文章中，关于环境我们可以找到三个词进行替换：environment, surrounding, atmosphere。
　　

　　参考范文：
　　

　　Creating a Green Campus

　　
　　Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individulas and society,for its significance cannot be denied.
　　

　　A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students. Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.

　　
　　In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory results. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.

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