新东方2013年6月英语四级作文点评

2013年6月大学英语四级考试已结束，新东方在线第一时间收集整理试题及参考答案，以下是新东方2013年6月英语四级作文点评供考生参考。


　　BOY：dad,Im a bit worried about.disposing of unclearweapon

　　DAD：if you can empty the dustbin here,.you can do anything

　　2013年四级作文话题在于讨论细节和成功的关系，是一个偏抽象的话题，同时出题方式也越来越难了-漫画形式。回顾从2011年12月开始，四级写作出现改革的风向，到现在总算稳定下来了。这和我在微博上强调的四六级各类文章最后一类所讲的观点评述类的写作方式完全一致，各位，思路很重要

　　第一段先解释文章的观点或者谚语，再加上一句漫画描述带一下既可。如本文中的From this picture, a little boy shows his worry about nuclear weapon while his father tells him to clear the dustbin.

　　第二段针对细节和成功所包含的要素进行分析，细节培

　　养习惯有助于成功，同时用对比来说明不重视细节，可能失败。

　　第三段正面评价：先说明细节很重要，在让步说明细节并不意味着成功，然后升华主题，说明在追求成功的过程中，细节的角色很重要。

　　范文如下：

　　From this picture, a little boy shows his worry about nuclear weapon while his father tells him to clear the dustbin. Just like this picture conveyed , in this day and age, a growing number of people are concerning about the large matters like current affairs while ignoring the importance of details around life.

　　If you wants to achieve great success or make great contirbution, small detials in life cannot be overlooked. First of all, doing small things could cultivate you a good habit in life and study, which may give you a positive mind to the future hardship. Meanwhile, large number of people more focus on how to great success than to deal with the details in life, as a result, they would fail in some day.

　　As I can see, details is more curicla to one’s life and career. Although details hardly stand for the coming success, yet it would be playing a vital role in the process of purusit of success.