2010年12月四级考试写作备考笔记（8）

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（2）举例加以论证。

Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点）

范文17. My View on Fate

There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.

注：1. consensus 相同意见

2. 第一句话可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.

3. while 轻微转折和对比，强转折用词but, however 4. master 主人

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.

注：1. 第一句as far as与I agree重复，把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。

2. architect 建筑师，archor 弓箭手

3. In fact 前后是转折关系，之前从正面阐述，之后从反面阐述

范文17. My View on Fate （续）

Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.

注：1. 本段开始举例

2. Let's take……for example 中间是插入语，表示强调，举例不宜太长。

In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

注：bear sth. in mind：把……牢记在心

范文13. The Way to Success

第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.

II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）；

(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific）。

Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句；

(2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）；

(3) 本段总结（可以省略）。

Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。

四级历年真题（2001-2009）

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六级历年真题（2001-2009）