大学英语四级常见低分作文：11分范文

　　英语四级作文评分标准：

　　1. 本题满分为15分

　　2. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

　　3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为所阅文章与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分);若认为所阅文章稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。

　　4. 评分标准

　　5. 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

　　5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

　　8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

　　11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

　　14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

　　[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。]

　　作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

　　得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7

　　下面看一下作文得分11分的范文。

　　11分

　　Nowadays, many parents do everything for their children. They cook meals and wash clothes for their children. And they even make all the choices for their children. Everything has done by the parents and the children will do nothing but following the parents’ decisions。

　　In order to help children to be independent, parents should follow the suggestions given below. First, let children do some housework, such as washing dishes and cleaning rooms. These works will not take too much time, but they are suitable for children to learn to live independently. Second, give the chance to manage the family to children. As a family member, child should know how to manage the family. And the parents should teach them this kind of skills. In this way, children can learn the necessary abilities to live on their own. And most important, give freedom to children and let them make their own choice. Only in this way can children grow up healthily。